Torture

Is it just me or Is candy the best? This time around the candy was torture. This torture was like jail. Most people eat candy In twenty seconds, not this time It took twenty minutes. That Is what I call torture. I could smell the candy, It smelled like the fall with all the fresh air. I love that fresh smell.
First step of this torture was to open the wrapper a tiny sliver. The wrapper Is like fireworks In the sky because the wrapper had different stars and stripes on it. When opening the wrapper seeing the candy made me get all exited. The candy was very squishy and had different lines going through it from me squishing it.
Finally the candy Is out, I cheered with joy. I finally got to see the beloved candy. The candy looked like a cloud In the sky. The biggest torture was when we had to put the candy In our mouth but we could not eat It.
At last we were able to bight down on the candy. I was so happy to finally be able to eat the candy. The candy ended up being horrible. It disappointed me like when you are so happy to be In a playoff game and then you lose.
Most candies are delicious I think. This candy that I ate was the worst candy I had ever eaten. This candy was so bad that It did not even have a name for It. I love most candy but not this piece.

Outside/Inside

briancomic I had to pick 3 poems first, second, and third. Then my teacher picked the best for me. Next I went to comic life and typed the poem. Then I had to change the figurative language to different fonts. After that I had to type in a speech bubble the main idea of the poem. Finally I had to go on the web and get pictures to add to my comic life. I am most proud that I learned that a poet should change the font for different words. This project shows me how poets should emphasize words. If I had more time I would learn more about comic life then then do what I learned.