Is it just me or Is candy the best? This time around the candy was torture. This torture was like jail. Most people eat candy In twenty seconds, not this time It took twenty minutes. That Is what I call torture. I could smell the candy, It smelled like the fall with all the fresh air. I love that fresh smell.
First step of this torture was to open the wrapper a tiny sliver. The wrapper Is like fireworks In the sky because the wrapper had different stars and stripes on it. When opening the wrapper seeing the candy made me get all exited. The candy was very squishy and had different lines going through it from me squishing it.
Finally the candy Is out, I cheered with joy. I finally got to see the beloved candy. The candy looked like a cloud In the sky. The biggest torture was when we had to put the candy In our mouth but we could not eat It.
At last we were able to bight down on the candy. I was so happy to finally be able to eat the candy. The candy ended up being horrible. It disappointed me like when you are so happy to be In a playoff game and then you lose.
Most candies are delicious I think. This candy that I ate was the worst candy I had ever eaten. This candy was so bad that It did not even have a name for It. I love most candy but not this piece.
Category Archives: English
North
north My class was learning about the civil war in social studies. We got to pick are topic. I picked the topic North. This is mine hope you enjoy.
Outside/Inside
briancomic I had to pick 3 poems first, second, and third. Then my teacher picked the best for me. Next I went to comic life and typed the poem. Then I had to change the figurative language to different fonts. After that I had to type in a speech bubble the main idea of the poem. Finally I had to go on the web and get pictures to add to my comic life. I am most proud that I learned that a poet should change the font for different words. This project shows me how poets should emphasize words. If I had more time I would learn more about comic life then then do what I learned.
My autobiography
Brian Conaghan autobio We had to make an autobiography poem because we were learning about autobiography. If you want to learn more about me you should read my autobiography.
Yankee Girl Connections
This is some connections from the book Yankee Girl. That Mrs. Kiedaisch read to us for about 2-3 months. It was really good! When my teacher read us Yankee Girl we made a lot of inference. Yankee_Girl_connections_Brian
My Narrative
the_creepy_bike_ride This is a creative narrative that i made over a month in school. I even had to take it home to work on. I think I could of did better by adding more adjectives and adverbs. I think I did good by using transition words.
Where The Wild Things Are
I was narrator 2 in Where The Wild Things Are. I liked that we each got equal parts. I think I can be more enthusiastic. What do you think I can do better?
Wild Things